Wednesday, February 25, 2009

New ending for Nothing but the truth

The process of Philip Malloy transferring to another school was long and tough. He felt isolated and lonely with no friends and familiar teachers. He was “destroyed”. Some times he wanted to try and make new friends but he had no confidence and thus did not carry it out.
The sun shone brightly and charred the pavement. Strong winds bushed past Philip Malloy, ruffling his hair and making it a mess. The fourth storey height was a scare as he sat on the ledge. Many of his new schoolmates and teachers were all have fun down at the first storey school park.
Small drops of shining yet crushing tears rolled down his cheeks and enter the seam of his mouth. Just in the nick of the time, the idea came. Thinking back of the Harrison High School scandal, he struck a lost thought of apologizing to his teacher Miss Narwin. A few minutes later and he would be toast on the ground at the first floor, luckily for him.
He immediately rushes out of the school and dashed for home. His parents approved and brought him to the school, where he apologized to Miss Narwin. She gladly accepted the apology and Philip Malloy was back to his old school again.

PS: Miss Narwin did not resign; it’s not like the ending of nothing but the truth.

2 comments:

  1. I agree that this is a nice ending. I could see that you had put in a lot of effort in doing this ending. Keep it up!

    However, this ending is not very original as there are quite a few blogs which had similar endings. The language use is not bad as there are many good phrases used.

    After reading your ending, I am convinced that Phillip Malloy would change for the better. I also hope that this incident would not happen in our real life (fingers crossed).

    Anyway, I enjoy reading through your blog very much as it is very enriching. I look forward to more blog posts. ;)

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  2. A nice piece of work it is!
    However, I think it is better to stick with the documentary style in the book as it is quite a hard time for me to link the new ending with the book.
    There is some really good pharses so keep it up!

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